This seems like more of a story than a poem... i really did like it though... it had a lot of emtotion in it and you said exactly how you feel and i really like that,... nice job and keep it up!

sammie

Wow, that poem had really good emotion. It's sad that things like happen.

Nice to see a poem without restrictive forced rhyming schemes. It helps add more feeling to the words.

Keep writing
Nici

I like how you kinda turned a story into a poem without REALLY making it a poem.
Great job.

Aww hunn thats so sad..keep your head held high and maybe he'll get a slapp in the face adn realize he needs you, liek you've always needed him. Please read some of my poems...whatever intrests you and I suggest Your F*-Up Barbie, Come Get Me, and Another Round. thnxs Keep writn' XXLISSA

Wowie...gr8 poem. there is so much emotion! btw congrats on gettin 1st in my contest! excellent poetry!

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Thank you for the comment :-). I like your poem too, it is better than mine. About your friendship ending, I hope you got a chance to say sorry or forgive or whatever unlike me. The poem has good emotion and you should enter a poem contest :-).

Wow! this is amazing. you are great : )

I love the way you write your poems! you got the talent love it

keep it up!