I'd love it if y'all will vote AND comment!I'd like to know what i can improve upon and what yall like!

Hey Syren...Very awesome poem. Keep up the nice work :D

Brilliant poem, i like the way it is continuous through out, i felt like that quite alot in my teens, just another statistic, can feel really crap

All i can say is so true.

Jenn

Itsa very deep. and a lot of people arwe goping thru this stuff so keep it up