The crimson river

by herewithme   Dec 13, 2005


As she reaches out for the knife
her hands violently shake
nobody can stop her
it's her life that she must take

"will anybody care if i let myself go?"
the answer to that, she'll never know
as she is guiding the silver blade
all her dreams begin to fade.

being swallowed into the darkness that is death
she draws herself up for her final breath
dying fast in a room so cold
the act she performed was selfish but bold.

the note she left beside her bed
near the little pool of red,
was spoilt by the crimson river
the note of love, the note of good-bye
will never be delivered

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  • 18 years ago

    by MadelineJayde

    Aww s0 sad but such a beautifully written p0em!! great j0b, y0u hav talent. thanks f0r c0mmenting 0n my p0ems, it means al0t ;x
    l0ve maddy x0ox

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    This was beautiful. I can relate to it..the feeling of lonelieness you have when you feel like your not need anymore. I really love the ending.
    Nicely written hun.

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aye i lyked dis...5\5.....love dia mwaz xoxo

    p.s thnks for da comment n soz if da story freaked u out a lil...but i jst thought it wud b intresting to rite..i dnt knw y but yeh...

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Thanx for reading my poem and commenting. I read a few of yours, and I think this one is my favorite. 5/5 Keep up the good work!
    Take Care,
    Megan

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Interesting poem, and thanks for the comment you left me, very much appreciated, I can see you have a talent kat.

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