Bittersweet poem, i loved it!

Heartbreaking!
There was a quiet panic, and yet also a loving calm about the poem...very nice indeed.
I wonder if it is true.
If something like that is true, then it is extremely sad. I could write a book about it.

There is a movie called Million Dollar Baby. The story is somewhat the same except that the woman is a boxer and gets paralyzed when she injures her spine, then her trainer "pulls the plug on her" it is so sad, yet somehow pure, and merciful at the same time.
Your poem sounded a lot like that. To kill someone because you love them so much.

Good Writing!
beth

You asked for a girls opinion and i think that was really touching. keep up the great writing.

Very powerful & emotional write Tim. Very sad but beautiful at the same time. I am so sorry for your lose if this is true. Wonderful job on this one.

Take care

Its such an excellent poem but it is so sad. I hope that you can feel better sometime. Dont worry when you pass on you can be with her again.

Oh my gosh!! that was BEAUTIFUL!! i loved it, it was sad and sweet...**5/5** definately!

**Lolli**

That's so sad. But a very good poem.

*Clouds n ur Is*

Wow.. That's beautiful, sweetheart.. So sad: / But very well written. I loved the emotion, and the flow was amazing.. *hugs* Keep it up, babe..

~Jessica
(Sorry I left you in the chatroom. I lost connection. Hope to talk to you soon.)

Wow, absolutly amazing, I find when I write I need to make the poem really long to get to the point, but this is a nice short, emotional, amazing poem of a truely sad story. I'm not sure if this is based on truth, but regardless, great emotion, great writing. I'm truely a fan. Please keep in touch.

O....that was sooo sad...I hate to think people would have to go thro that.... k peeps, never drink and drive!

Heartwrenching write ...great job!

0mg what a heartfelt piece. very well written. such a t0uching piece. g0od j0b, thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk! meant al0t! =)

Damn i hate poems
that make me cry
but this ones really good
i love it!

Thank you all for reading my work it really means a lot to me!!!

Very heart touching and emotional. i loved reading it. i hope u didnt go thru all this. keep writing dear
take care, bharti

This is so sad. i am so so sorry. very touching poem. very well written.

Wow, that was a beutiful poem, im still shoked and crying. tears down my face once again. breathless. that was one of THE best poems i've read and u no y because its heartfelt and written by sooo much passion in a moment of pain captured so well. i hope this isnt true but if it is i feel for u and hope u better. well gd luck and take care. a defenite 5.

That was really good

Dude this poem struck me as depressing. If i ever lost my g/f like that then i would be histerical. Good poem tim, it creates emotion and gets a rise out of the audience. Rate some of my poetry. Peace
[Theo]

HEARTBREAKING!!!! this was really heart felt...i could feel my heart breaking with yours!!! i loved it