I Wish

by Cantchangeme   Dec 13, 2005


I wish you were my drug
Rushing into my vein
I wish you were my heart
Controlling my brain

I wish this was my death
So that I could start
I wish you were my mind
Controlling my heart

I wish you were my silver
Contaminating my gold
I wish you were my warmth
Leaving me cold

I wish you were my smile
Shining out bright
I wish you were my vision
Obscuring my sight

I wish you were my scars
So you'll never leave
I wish you were my lungs
making sure I breathe

I wish you were my suicide
Taking my life
I wish that I was the blood
Staining your knife

I wish that you were real
Not just drawing lines
I wish that you were real
I wish you were mine

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  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This is a really cute poem.. it flowed well.. rhymed really well to.. Great word choice also.. 5/5 oh and it had lots of emotion in it..

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Black*Rose~

    This poem is just wonderfull, I usally have a very low image of poem with the same repeating line, but this poem is beyond appropriate, I love your use of words, my favorite line was
    [I wish you were my suicide
    Taking my life
    I wish that I was the blood
    Staining your knife]

    Leep writting becasue these poems are wonderfull.

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