by DamselInDistress Dec 13, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Pale as a ghost |
by Dreams
Creepy and dark. Brilliantly done. You portrayed the character very well in this poem. The descriptions and all are vivid and strong. A poem for a length like this, a great amount of effort has to be done. |
by Ashelin
YOu seemed to repeat a few things several time, making this poem feel like a run on. It's really good other then that.! |