Comments : Notice Me

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Hey gurl thanx for your comment on my spanish poem... Im glad u understood it dat's cool dat u know spanish very nice... well i have more in my site if u wanna read any time okay... well about ur poem i loved it my fave 2 parts are dis cuz i feel exactly like dat:
    I do not know what i should do,
    to my heart you hold the key.
    But i do not think you have a clue,
    that i just want you to notice me.
    And after everything i have tried,
    you still do not seem to see.
    I do not necessarily need you to be mine,
    i really just want you to notice me.....

    I LOVE IT 5/5 gurl (half for the poem and half goes out to u for knowing spanish lol) ciao =)

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Ps: hope u do become a journalist u can write 4 real and u r young 2 so in a few years when ur 18 imagen what u can do =)