Great imagery once more, lovely flow, similair to your other work...maybe try a different structure? Great job, powerful read

Great job with the wording, its dark and different! you've got great talent! keep it up! thanx for the comment xoxo

Magnificent word play in this.

"Web spun from my many mistakes,
Catch my pain and fuel my hate."

I'm lovin' those lines. So powerful....

Oh and the imagery is flawless. Keep it up~Holly