Wow...you really got some talent here woman! I've enjoyed reading these 2 poems...wish I had more time to continue. This was SO CREATIVE! What an idea!!! I love the bouncing back and forth from the two people and the happy ending. Who would have thought it would have ened like that....it was set up a bit like a suicide story...glad you didn't end it that way. Excellent write.....and welcome to my hall of fame...lol Take Care

Aww i loved that poem :-) it was so cute!! and there was a happy ending yay :D i love happy endings :D

Wow this is a great poem!! It's so sweet, just like a fairy tale. 5/5

Aww i love that its wo sweet!!! something outta a movie!!

Oooo i love the way u made like two people writeing it great

great job

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This poem shows form two perspectives that love will find its way if two people want ti bad enough. Great work!!!
i gave you a 5

I loved it! The last dear diary made me smile. Keep up the good work! I'll see you around!

What an amazingly creative write ..
I really have to say I loved it . It's uniqueness will make it unforgettably special ..
I especially loved the ending ... Always love the happy endings *S*

Wonderful... The poem starts by running the pain deep into my heart as you both feel so sad and lonesome. Then the happiness appears where you are both so eager to find your way back, until finally the joy and sorrow are washed away with love. Great work... Enjoyed the read a lot!!

This poem is soo good! Great work! :) I know the feeling of wondering if that special someone is thinkin of you when you're thinkin of them! I love the poem!

Wow...I have never seen a poem set up that way before, and it is a very good poem. Something similar to that happened to my friend. I am going to show her this poem. 5/5

Awwwwwwwww!

Omg.. this poem is SOOO good!
Exellent!!

Great story. Great work. Loved it.

Hey well I think that this poem was great! keep up the good work.

Omgosh i LOVE your poem!! like honestly LOVE it!! its so cute!! the first entry is totally what i feel!! i hope but doubt hes the second!! i love the way you wrote it its so different!! keep writing!! your so good at it!! is it true?? comment back if you would!!

Wow amazing poem! i really liked it! ur amazing! so many great poets on this site, keep it up

Wooww nice poemmm

keep writinggg!!

I really like this poem. It was really well written.

OMGAH!! i LOVE THiS POEM! iTS PURDiFULS! MAD LOVE TO YOU! KEEP ON WRiTIiNG GURLiE.!!