Nice poem! Love It!!

This poem was good. Sad at the beginning but with a happy ending. You are really good.

Hahaha I am at work right now and I've been reading ur poems since yesterday until now, yes! I am very free...I guess u can say that lolz...Aniwayz All ur peoms, each and everyone is so MEANINGFUL, POWERFUL, EMOTIONAL, HEARTTHROBBING, it send chills through my back everytime I finish the last line...I can't believe u are only 18 and since u first joined this website in 2005, that makes u 15 when u started...it just blow my minds away! You are the only person I added as favorite so far...

Aniwayz why did I decide to leave a comment now? but not for the other ones...well because this poem started off as sad, unlike most which started off as HAPPY NORMAL, and has a happy ending...I thought they were gonna kill themselves or something, but instead they have a kid together, thats so beautiful! I wonder how u look like lolz

WOW!!!! a-ma-zing..I loved it....liked the idea of using the diary...Keep up the good job...!!5/5 ^_^

WOW!!! This is an Excellent Poem, ver sweet and touching. Honestly Great work. Im Speechless.

Whoa... this one is just fantastic... beautifully written... no sarcastically profound words... just good...

Nice!

Well written, misunderstanding parts away but true love will not let go....... enjoyed the poem

Wow