by Passionate Dec 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Spinning, dizzy, lonely road. trot by no one, your body only a ghost. images vivid and bright, a wrist sucking you in pulling you tight. faces surrounding blurred out by light, darkness comes over you but you can feel it's not night. warmth of this creature, the touch of his lips, his hands placed so right on your hips. bashing, breaking, and all alarm. head racing, air come and gone. treading slow and heavy, wondering if your soul is ready. lost beneath, new you is born. loud screams of the trumpets horn. |
by dwight
I didn't rate this a two! I didn't rate it at all. Why do you rate mineso bad, if you liked it |
by dwight
Nice poem!, although you can't say its a poem, but still, I really liked it! |