by Void Dec 14, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
So worn |
Im really sorry for your friend R.I.P. No deserves to be push to the limit like this, its so cruel. Your right you only have one chance at life, it shouldnt be upto someone else to take it away from you, in a sense of mentality, so much so you take your own life. Anyway, well written poem, it flows a rhymes beautifully, beautifuly and sad poem, well done, your so talanted, keep it up, |
by Lalala
I love this poem! I'm sorry about your friend, but remember that everthing they do will come back to them. |
by ShadowDancer
Lovely. wonderful. it is offten so easy to ignore some ones suffering. i hope your poem will help people look out for each other. |
by Robie Lincer
That was a good poem |
by Amy
Hey me again thats really good!! |