by Amy Dec 14, 2005
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
Hey mum I'm sorry |
This is soo cute!! and you should post the wifes letter!! |
by BrokenMisery
Brings back a lot of memorys from History, thats for sure. You have some good points in this ballad and I like it too. Again some more puntuation would be handy :P and take notice of your meter in these kinds of poems. The rhymings good but I think you will be able to improve still on that in further poems. Good work! |