Beautifully written, but how it tears at my heart. So sad.....lonely and alone....I am at a loss for words.....look deep inside. Your inner strength is there and you will find it. You have a part to play in this world. Through your poetry, you touch so many people.....don't give that gift away. Find your strength.

A very sombre poem. Powerful and full of strong emotion. My heart feels cold and sore from the pain this poem is emitting! A very good poem... Where your treasure is there will your heart be also... Never stop the search for pure love and inner peace!

Katie please listen to me, you are one of the most wonderful people I have ever met. Please don't throw yourself away like this, You'll be out of hospital soon.

Be strong
Luv Scarlet xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Feeling your pain with this write, from beginning to end....This is truly emotional..... find your strength from deep within Katie and from there you will find a peaceful heart. Keep on writing, you have such a unique talent and you touch others through your powerful words.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Check out a couple spots in the poem, like the first line. the ' is all messed up but i know that's not your fault

this poem i would have to say isn't your best but is certainly good. it's unquie as well. great job with the poem!

~Jacklyn

Well...first I was going to say the transition from the first part to the second part was a little awkward since in the first stanza you had one word lines...followed by the lines in the second part which were rather long....however...I loved it! It came together so nicely. I think one can get carried away with the linear aspect of writing as you may want it to be even all through...so it's refreshing to see something uneven that actually worked. My favorite line, "screaming to the wind this is my world, my life,
yet how shall I live" I think this captures a feeling many know all to well. Many young teens and even adults experience this feeling…sad thing is...many have no clue how to cope. Should this have been an expression direct from your life…I hope all is well for you are a very talented writer…Keep your head up and stay strong!

Since I’ve never thanked you – I will now – thanks for all your wonderful comments. I work full time and spend very little time on the computer so when I don’t get back to you right away please know that your time never goes unnoticed! Take Care Katie!

That was an amazing poem

just ...wow

This poem was pretty gooooood, keep up the good work

Awsome...very emotional

I just realised. You used my name in that!

Luv Scarlet xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

An amazing and deep poem..i hope you're not truly thinking of anything like the title suggests, because you'd be throwing too much away.
take care of urself xoxo

Wow thats really really good!!! i kno wat u mean... this poem kicks ass