Comments : Tragedy Part 1

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Hey, this was good. Although you need some more flow and grammer use. I can't wait to read the next part.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 3/5
    (Irate harshly so I'm not going to rate it, okay?)

  • That was really good. and im sorry for what happened. keep it up 5/5