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by mistressxsork
Hey, this was good. Although you need some more flow and grammer use. I can't wait to read the next part. -Jennifer. Overall Rating: 3/5 (Irate harshly so I'm not going to rate it, okay?)
by **Ashley**Loves**Justin**H.**
That was really good. and im sorry for what happened. keep it up 5/5