Nice poem, your grandpa would be very proud, I'm sure.
keep it up
dwight

Really nice job....

What a sweet and fantastic write! I can relate to this so well! It's simply beautiful!

I really like the poem, I lost my grandpa a few years ago but I still miss him and what you have write is very nice and I know what you feel

(I live in Belgium so my English is not so good, sorry)