I no this feeling! ur flow is beautiful and the poem is smooth. theres isnt much depth but i dont belive this type of poem needs depth hey! its just so simple and realistic, yet amazing touching! keep it up

Awe................. Your poem has so much feeling..5/5

Beautiful, great job...5/5

Aww....Loved the poem,I know how you feel!! Flow is wonderful and short but sweet!!! great job
toodles
xoxox
~~Sweetie

Hey this is josh swanson.. i like this poem.. reminds me of a girl that did that for me.. ttyl

This poem really touched me. How beautiful.