by ♥Leah♥ Dec 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I see how you treat her, |
by nicola
Reminds me of me to.. excellent work |
by Esther
I like the way you have layed this out!!! It is really good! By the way I think it is great that you only at the end put because this girl was me! |
by pale angel
Sweet chin music that was great I LOVE THE END it takes and another tole when you get to the end and find out that it was you telling of your own death. keep this up another 5/5 |
by Falling Up
Hey. please read either Falling into oblivion, or half past nine. then tell me which one of yours .. talk to ya later. Samantha |
by Falling Up
Wow. i REALLY enjoyed this one. its a shame how terrible just one boy can make us feel. i sometimes think they dont take our feelings seriously enough, and dont care enough to see what they do and how it effects us. ive been hurt so many times i seriously wished i would dye, because it feels like theres no more need to live because every boy has done this to me i dont know why i deserved such pain when all i did was care for him, love him, and gave him my world. i just wish boys would realize that when they hurt us they REALLY hurt is, and its no joke, and they dont realize this till something serious happens. i really hope that one day theyd open up there eyes and realize the truth. |