Oh WOW! This is fabulouus, what an amazing poem! Very well written!

I worte this poem about me and my boyfriend, and how i feel sometimes because of him. the night i wrote this i had taken a step back and i had saw how he really treated me when i wasn't lying to myself about how he does treat me. so this means a lot to me.
thanks.

WOW! this is an amazingly well written poem! i love it! and i love the work you write! thanks for believeing*sp?* in me!! i really enjoy reading your poems! and thanks again! it's helped me see the sunlight thru the dark clouds in my life! you can email me if you want, and i'll email you back softball_jenn_17@hotmail.com okay? it'll be greatly appreciated! oh and read my newer poems?!!? byeeee

Aww thats is sad. Keep up the good work though. Sry that happened to you.

~juls~

Great write! Though it's sad to praise on a sad poem, but I love it! My only suggestion is that if the poem was in stanzes, it may add more of a punch / impact. Great work though! Keep writing. 5/5

Wow. i REALLY enjoyed this one. its a shame how terrible just one boy can make us feel. i sometimes think they dont take our feelings seriously enough, and dont care enough to see what they do and how it effects us. ive been hurt so many times i seriously wished i would dye, because it feels like theres no more need to live because every boy has done this to me i dont know why i deserved such pain when all i did was care for him, love him, and gave him my world. i just wish boys would realize that when they hurt us they REALLY hurt is, and its no joke, and they dont realize this till something serious happens. i really hope that one day theyd open up there eyes and realize the truth.

Hey. please read either Falling into oblivion, or half past nine. then tell me which one of yours .. talk to ya later. Samantha

Sweet chin music that was great I LOVE THE END it takes and another tole when you get to the end and find out that it was you telling of your own death. keep this up another 5/5

heahter

I like the way you have layed this out!!! It is really good! By the way I think it is great that you only at the end put because this girl was me!

Reminds me of me to.. excellent work