This poem is great, i love the way you tell this story.

Wow. great poem. loved it. keep it up

='( so much pain and emotion expressed in this poem... this is absolutely amazing, hun. You're really talented... keep up the great writing, and I hope that you're okay!!

Again another lovely poem. very good emotion. Its beautiful. I can only suggest maybe using more commas... because the give ur poem a sence of rhythm. other then that. its amazing:) great job!

There are no words to explain how beautiful I think this was ! :$
Amazing..

xxx

Omg, this is a terrific poem!!!!!!!!

Great poem i understand i feel the same way if you want to talk to someone that feels the same way just email me!!!!!!

Loved this poem :)

I rated it a 5/5
i can really realte to this poem about one of my x's very very good
im gonna try to read all of ur poems but i mite run out of time but ill try u are really talented

Mmm... the sting felt from love's bite. It seems as though we always remember those who broke our hearts. Good write babe.

--Sher

Its so sad >.< so expressive its like i can imagine this happening to me and the one i love >.

I like this poem, it is so sad, and I am sorry that your going through this, your very talented, and I love the form of the poem.

Very touching hun, reads great, very fluent and emotional.

The rhyming is excellent! Love your poems.. By the way, you're on my favourites list =)

Wow that was awesome. gave me chills cuz i know exactly how it feels.

Thhis is just awesome... sorry for delay in replying
ur poem's great
5/5
love
amy

This is really a good poem

Hey.. this is reli gud too.. i lyk the way u progressed thru the whole poem.. agen, ur rhyme was gr8.. keep it up
i just have one suggestion.. i think u shud change ur last line from "Your the reason why i cry" to "You're the reason I cry" or "You're why I cry" if u wanna keep teh relationship between the line and the title.. coz "reason" is alredy "why".. does that make sense??? look out 4 the misspellings.. like "your" to "you're" coz they sound different in text (ok, i now they dont, but wen i read, homophones mean different..lyk wen u wrote your the first thing it thot was your as its meaning, soo..)
well, i guess thats it
ill be comin bak 4 more of ur poems asap.. ( i got tests evryday this week)
take care
NannO