by Matters Dec 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Smoothing out the wrinkles, |
OMG, this is so good, can't believe my eyes, you use words that even I couldn't have thought off if given a time of 10 years, haha, this is good, love it... |
by aliiiii
It was awsome. Just like all of your poems, 5/5! it was great! |
by Dory
Yes. you should write a "sequel"...? Awesome matt. Thank you for commenting on my "best poem yet". Thank you for helping me with those two lines...?. lol. love ya. |
OMFG you're like one of the best poet keep it up 5/5 |
by Bella
That...was loads better than most of the stuff on this site. Could use a little work, but still, I like your word choice and the fact that it isn't about a cheesey heartbreak. |