Drowning (Part IV)

by Matters   Dec 14, 2005


Part four! Finally!

All it was was innocent,
A day for only fun,
To enjoy each other's presence,
It was his final one.

Hand in hand you strolled,
Aware of only love,
A passionate embrace,
A guidance from above.

So he took you to the water,
Beautiful yet frozen,
A skate on the canal,
Now more than ice is broken.

When he took your elegance,
And stroked your auburn hair,
All to see was love,
Ignoring the aware.

Fingers intertwined,
Heart combines with heart,
When you dropped your scarf,
Was when your lives were torn apart.

He smiled at your laugh,
His face began to glow,
Hands upon your ears,
When it began to snow.

He kissed you soft and gently,
And the unthinkable came through,
He bent down to get your scarf,
And he had fallen through.

Please don't rate this on just this part... there are three other parts so far, and it's better to read them all. Please do or if not don't vote at all. Thanks.

There are still more parts to come!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Help!! I want to know what happens next!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by SilentxThoughtz

    Wow! You're really good. I love your poetry...I can't wait till the other parts come out. Keep writing poems like this. It's great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fugi Andisfather

    Whoa this poem rocks i cant believe you are so skilled and youre only 12! im 13 and not even close to as good as you are!

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Wow... that was amazing. I read the other three parts as well. Very intense. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~lost*and*lonely~

    I love every poem by you cause you're just awesome !!! keep it up much love