AW, I'm sad its part 4, I hope theres a part 5 hehe, This is beautiful I love your "love" poems. They're so pretty and amazing, They make me smile so thanks for making my day hun and for waking me up, hehe i was drifting away there but this poem caught my interest, well done

Awesome again matt..wow..
i love how they actually all are a story..you're too talented:P
great story, very original, although i hope this never happened!
thakns for your comments, they mean a lot..=)
my latest poem is dedicated to u among others..check it out:P

much love, anna
xoxox

Wow, this was brilliant. it was so beautifully written, and really clever how the story continued. the ending was amazing too, just...wow!!
keep up the great work :)
luv xxEmmaxx

Terrific! Keep it coming!

-Taylor

Oh my holy wow, this poem is amazing as are the other three, i just read them all in quick succession, they are incredibly good and when i looked at your profile it said you were only 12! I don't know any 12 year old who ahs such writing skills and good vocabulary, lol thats amazing, you are most deff going in my faveorites, i am jealous of your talent lol

lots of love
*!*Becky*!*

*crys* 5/5

I love every poem by you cause you're just awesome !!! keep it up much love

Wow... that was amazing. I read the other three parts as well. Very intense. Keep it up.

Whoa this poem rocks i cant believe you are so skilled and youre only 12! im 13 and not even close to as good as you are!

Wow! You're really good. I love your poetry...I can't wait till the other parts come out. Keep writing poems like this. It's great.

Help!! I want to know what happens next!!!