by Jessica Dec 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
When can I see you? |
by Jay27
Awwww...when i read the part about the knock at the door reminds me of that White Stripes song "My Doorbell"... |
by Angie
I truly love how you write.... each write is short but so powerful.... this one is filled with desire for the one you love and long for...... |
Jessica, |
by Nathan
It's short but I can emphathize with you and what you tried to depict in your poem. I think it very good |
by Simon Hayes
Yes me too.. The anguish bites you... I'm sure the wait will be over soon, and I'm certain it will be worth waiting for. All love is :) |