Thinking Of You

by Jessica   Dec 14, 2005


When can I see you?
Longing, yearning to see
Your beautifully handsome face.
I close my eyes and I see you.
Hoping you're real
I reach out
To caress your face
But it vanishes before my eyes.
Longing for your hugs,
Your kisses,
Your tender touch.
Oh, how I need you baby!
I'm going insane...
I heard a knock at the door,
Prayed it was you,
But it wasn't...
Oh, my sweet precious baby,
When can I see you??
Without you I die a little more inside...
Baby...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    Awwww...when i read the part about the knock at the door reminds me of that White Stripes song "My Doorbell"...

    *I'm thinkin 'bout my doorbell, when ya gonna ring it, when ya gonna ring it?*

    sweet and sad, just how i like them!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    I truly love how you write.... each write is short but so powerful.... this one is filled with desire for the one you love and long for......

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Jessica,

    This was a beautiful, tender loving piece of writing, well done! It is all so worthwhile in the end.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Nathan

    It's short but I can emphathize with you and what you tried to depict in your poem. I think it very good

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Yes me too.. The anguish bites you... I'm sure the wait will be over soon, and I'm certain it will be worth waiting for. All love is :)