Story of a Friend of Mine

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Dec 14, 2005


Broken girl, empty heart and mind,
Wishes she couldn't see you, wanting to be blind.
Broken heart, best friend a razor,
Doesn't like herself, so she becomes a poser.

Bleeding wrists, from endless tears,
That have remolded her through the years.
Puffy cheeks, blood shot eyes,
All because of your lies.

Lost voice, cannot speak out,
Sometimes wants to, but is overcome with doubt.
Lost smiles, with so many fake laughs,
Her depression has left the graph.

Tears of blood, streak her face,
She gives up in this race!
Tears of loss, tears of sadness,
Thinking people couldn't really care less!

She goes off to die, alone and in pain,
At her funeral they state she wasn't sane.
She knows that she was, she just gave up with life,
So she used her friend Mr. Knife.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Aww..that was a true story??
    Thats so sad :(
    It's Good but still....I have noticed that most ur poems are sad....
    When you right a happy one you gotta come tell me ok! :)

    Jen
    Comment#13

    The Final one :)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Hey! Congrats, you have won the first place in my contest! I chose you to be the grand winner, because I just fell in love with youre poem. It's so good, yet dramatic.

    Excellent!

    Love,
    Line

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Once again, such a sad poem. You're very good at expressing your emotions through your poems. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey,
    that was depressing!! nice flow though but i hope it was all just ur imagination...take care of urself & stay strong

  • 19 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Wow, very beautifull !!
    xxx