Falling

by alwaysremeniceus   Dec 14, 2005


Just another silly girl,
immature, naive and cold,
never felt any warmth,
until he showed her what she was always told.

time passes by,
it was never easy,
and its scary how time flies,
she loved him so much, i guess it was a bit cheesy.

but it used to go like this; each time she falls,
he would be there holding her hand,
she'd stand back up quickly,
continuing to walk this land.

hand in hand,
side by side,
thats how it used to be,
but now, it doesn't seem like a possibility.

she's fallen again,
he's fallen as well,
but they are on the floor,
not wanting to get back up, everyone can tell.

confused and scared,
they continue to fall alone,
they have no idea, except this winter weather is now cold to the bone.

it was OK all along,
who, what, where, when, why and how?
what went wrong?
but he pushed her away, so its all just falling now.

this fall won't just scratch her,
her and her heart,
its like a scar,
the first and deepest one, she has to carry from the start.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Great job!! 5/5 it flowed greatly good job it went great! the emotion was there so thats always a bonus! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Russell

    That was a good poem.You do have some talent and i hope it gets you far...keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Oh, wow! that was exellent! i loved it. stay strong, hang in there.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    This was gr8...but sad poem r supposed 2 b under sad poems...not luv poems....5/5 tho!!!

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Great job. Keep writing; you're talented.

    Tiffany.xox.

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