I couldn't help it

by Becky   Dec 14, 2005


It was overwhelming
the pressure was too great
i couldn't help it

it was the first time
in about 3 weeks
i couldn't help it

it was calling my name
telling me of release
i couldn't help it

and it sounded great
for a moment of peace
i couldn't help it

i saw it in the drawer
it winked that innocent wink
i couldn't help it

i held it in my hand
felt the familiar surface
i couldn't help it

that feeling came flowing back
the familiarity gushing from it
i couldn't help it

i held it close
let it kiss my skin
i couldn't help it

i sat back in my seat
and let out a breathe
i helped it

i kinda wrote this for my one friend trying to tell them without really saying it that i cut again, i dunno please comment and tell me if you think he will figure it out without me having to say it right out??

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  • 18 years ago

    by unnoticedXlove

    Becky thats super de duper good i love it almost as much as i love u!!! hahahaha weeeeee

  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    Awww...

    I'm sorry Becky.

    You'll get over it. You're awesome. You and your poems.

    Well, great job.

    I believe you are going in my favorites as well... =O

    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    I actually connect with this poem on some way...even thoe i never did it...i love it and i feel like u r a wonderful writer...keep up the great work...5/5
    love always
    PrecIoSa

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow, i can completely relate to that, its an excellent poem. i think ur friend will probably work it out, and it explains the addiction really well, so it should make more sense to him. i know how hard it is to say it out loud to people, so if u feel its easier this way, then have a go. try and think positively about the 3 weeks, thats excellent.
    take care, and good luck,
    lots of luv,
    xxEmmaxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ellen

    This is really good, and don't worry...I think he'll get the picture by the time he's done reading.

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