Comments : Sliping, sliding, falling..

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    My options are so limited,
    my future is so bleak.
    I'm trying to be strong,
    but inside I feel so weak.-

    I love your poetry. It's... helpful knowing i'm not the only one feeling so crazy. I thought you were feeling better since you had a bf?

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow!! u simply have the true art, u can write such poems on such diff themes and they all make such great flow/rhyme...that it really becomes like any cool journey while going thro it..

    great work...all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Geoff Clemence

    Another exellent write Cimara. Great account of a feeling which I think is something so many can relate to but wouldn't express. Nice one. Keep em coming!
    Geoff.