by Blasphemy Dec 15, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
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Darker than hell, |
by UnToLd TrUtH
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I can't believe you think that your poems are bad! This is so good. Good job :) |
by AlexJ
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Really good poem! Simple and clear! Nice job! |
by BrokenMisery
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You've got good ideas, experiment with them, use some more punctuatuion (remember the way you say something can mean just as much as how you say it, same applies in poetry) and fix your spelling (eg. insane). Well keep on writing and good luck in the future. |
by BeeBeeGun
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Well done all your poems are really good and the words describe the way you feel very well |
by Jayme Gamble
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Good one keep it up |