Always

by SammiBABY   Dec 15, 2005


You have me hanging on every word,
Everything around us becomes so blurred,
Never has inspiration been any higher,
Here in my heart you will always be heard.

I have taken it all in; I'll never forget a conversation,
Every second with you is in my minds preservation,
I cannot help remember each opinion you convey,
You always have my fullest concentration.

Every sentence you speak in your beautiful way,
Leaves identical words in my heart to stay,
The feelings and actions your pure words spurred
Have taught me things that will not go astray

It all captivated me; words full of passion and fire,
Said so unknowingly of the way they inspire,
Had me left to relive with little reservation,
Always remembering the words I desire.

I wonder if this rhyme scheme has been used before. It is: a a b a c c d c d d a d b b d b. I have no idea what that is called! It is about someone who I have spoken to heaps this year and I have sub-consciously memorised every conversation as it happened! Now I can recite any days discussion at any given time! I find it so funny! :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    I dont knw wat to say! its good,its more then good its jus an awsum poem huni keep it up babez.
    5/5
    tke care

    nami

  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    This is really good babe...:-), you must have such a good memory!! love ya

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Lol thats so cute sammi is it still about the person i'm thinking hehe u gotta fill me in babe xox rc

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h hey darl. g0od j0b 0n this. beautifully written. g0od j0b 0n it great p0em - g0od use 0f w0rds. i liked the style!!! keep it up!