Wow i lvoe this poem, you have the perfect amount of detail and the perfect amount of like mystery, its very very good

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

AWW court this is so sad but very awesome. i love how u use bloody. lol well keep them up, love ya always,
Ashleigh Sue

Very nice job, I haven't ready any from you for a while either ^-^

Really well written, overalll a great poem

5/5