Good work on this poem, I thought you did a good job expressing yourself. I think you might have a typo here though
'No longer if you steal her from my soul will I you see me plain'

Eh, It was pretty good. But for some weird reason I think it should be in poems about life? Eh, I dunno lol.

It was a good poem though. Had alot of true meaning it it. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.