RaZOR bLaDe
by Brandi.. Dec 15, 2005
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DA RAZOR BLADE FALLS 2 DA GROUND BLOOD IS RUNNIN DOWN HER ARM SHE TINKS ITS THE END BUT IS IT REALLY? SHE STARTS 2 TINK HOPE STARTS 2 SINK FAITH IS GONE AND DARKNESS FALLS IS IT REALLY WORTH IT ALL? SHE FALLS 2 DA GROUND SLOWLY FALLIN IN2 A DEEP SLEEP & SOON SHE IS AWAKENABLE |
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18 years ago
by dwight
Is fair, because the idea was really good, and the way you expressed yourself was touching,
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18 years ago
by dwight
This may not be a poem, but the rating "poor", 2, which the other guy gave you, that is just unfair. I would give you a 4, but because of the two, I'll give you a 5 to even out the score. I think THAT
