by Letty Dec 15, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
As the heel of my black slipper's click against the shiny marble floor, my attention is completely focused on my surrounding's . Never before in all my days of living, have I seen such beauty . |
by LostSoul
I am just wondering something, |
by Tim Bradshaw
Wow very well told may need a little work but i always feel you go with your first instinct no matter the outcome i never change the way it is |
by Kelly
Very interesting.. could have been much better but it tended to be a little unfocused. I like the concept though. |
by BrokenMisery
An interesting story. You may want to look at your speech marks again because some are in weird position or only being one. I'm interested also as to why the darkness was behind the dream, was it that nothing I reality or dreams is perfect, I felt that was left empty and unexplained however that in itself gives a whole new view on the story I when you think over it. Well it’s certainly left in my mind. Good work. |