A great write with a big message! Love it!

Good write, a little hard to read in places (needs editing, i always have to do this too..). but yes, i think you described the situation very well. good message. well done.

Hey once again this is awsum darl keep it up. a little hard to read coz of the funny ?!?!@?! things but still sends out a gr8 message. i luv it
amy

I feel the same way looken in the mirrow, very nice.. xoxox Rachel

I agree with u 100%,, i see that ur from australia!!! i love ozzies, my aunt lives there and i have a penpal in sydney,,, i bought a cd of savage garden resently,, and one of the songs quoted,,"i believe beauty magazines promote low self asteem" and that is soooo true,, i had a low self image, and i relised that it was coz of all the magazines i was reading,, more power to ya,,, love ur work, try rhiming more tho, pls read some of mine and tell me what u think,, thx*
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I so agree with you. and once again amazing amazing piece. this sounds like something i would write, i really understand where your coming from.

Stay strong,
Much Love,
Tiffani

This poem is awesome! I know how you feel. Whenever i look into the mirror...thats exactly what i think. This poems really hit home for me. But your right god did make us all unique! We don't have to try to be those models on tv ot anythin. We're us...we're beautiful! Your a very good writer! Nice style and good job with the rhyming! Keep up the amazing work! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Chica~