Wow thats so good, I can relate to a lot of whats in there, and you wrote it with such emotion... great job

Robbie

I too, in certain aspects can relate to this. but as ive learned, and you soon will as well, you are never alone. you sholdnt cry over things that arent happening. if you wnt somthing to happen, then make it happen. Rome wasnt built in a day!

Sounds exactly like me... feel free to read some of my poems as well...

great poem. excellent. 5/5! wonderful..

hugs,
michelle

This cool thing about this poem is that it almost reads like how I would imagine someone's thoughts to sound like. It was like I was in someone's head hearing their thoughts and feelings, whether intended or not that was a cool effect.

"I Try To Cut, But Afraid,
Afraid Of The Pain . ."

This part, is it true? If it is be afraid of cutting, be terified, whatever it takes for you to not do it, not a road you want to do, I've been there and you don't want to go.

-Tainted Mikochan

Good emotion! I felt you could have went a little deeper into this topic, however, since you covered such a broad subject. Kudos, though.

ONE OF YOUR BEST POEMS;;; looovvee it 5/5