Teddy Bear

by Lecrissa   Dec 15, 2005


Teddy bear,
Teddy bear,
What secretes
Have you been told?

You know where my candies are hidden
And my rock of fools gold

Teddy bear,
Teddy bear,
Will you be here
In sorrow?

My best friend moved away
And I lost my doggy

Teddy bear,
Teddy bear,
Will you share
The pain?

I fell down
And scraped my knee
my tummy aches rub my belly

Teddy bear,
Teddy bear,
Will you always be
The silent friend?

There for me
When I need
Someone to listen

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  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    The repetition is good. but some of the other lines seem a bit random eg 'My best friend moved away
    And I lost my doggy'
    they dont really fit together.
    in the 3rd line 'secretes' should be 'secrets'

    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is really good aswell, Its good how you used Teddy Bear. It sounds cute!

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I redid this poem I think it still needs a little tweeking. I'm working on it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Im not really sure what this poem is about, But it sounds good. It sounds as if this teddy bear is a little girls best friend, And she tells it all her secrets. Anywho, Good job =]

    luv natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow. i love this poem. your an excellent writer.

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