Good work on this poem. I thought you did a good job. I really liked how you repeated let me forget, it seems to add a boost, to make it even better.

Ssounds like love and the poem flowed beautifully

This would make a really good song hun!

Ouch! I feel your pain in every verse. Well done.

Gone but not forgotten.

Thats some pretty good stuff.. i reli enjoyed reasing it.. i lykd how u kept repeating "let me forget" it was lyk u hit the target.. hehe.. anyway, gr8 job with this one
i appreciate ur comment, thnx a zillion
take care
NannO