When time touch its destiny....

by unstated affinity   Dec 15, 2005


Captivating the sight of your dream...
fabrics of thought lies shattered
treasures mountain, tranquil stream
season of bless slowly weathered...

the glittering sunlight peeps from the sky....
await for your solace touch
cascading the green, green grass
shimmering splendid brought the sense of peace....

trees bow in silence...
within your abundant charm of loveliness
break away the cold spell of winter
put us in a warm consolation...

the gushes of the stream, the gold arbion of water
splashing arround us as raindrops of love....
a simple life that i always fancy
which i hope comes to eternity

but alas...
what a woeful despair
i am simply lack of flair
when this heart strangled of hapinnes
i just unfamiliar with words
the word of love seems hidden solemntly with the evening wind
the ordinary thing that i've never seen

stuck in a pile of sand
on just another way of saying goodnight.....
although deep in my heart
just like heaven, i want to hold u tight..

sharing such unbridle life, apart from all turbulence..
such sentimental scenery and the wild night
girl thats all i've been longing
yet i left in silence without saying anything...

sometimes i feel like a silly star
lamenting its ability to twinkle
listening to your wish , and dream, with your special style
but i just end up with smile.....

i just believe that one day
when time touch its destiny..
i could bring you inside my story
our fairy world, enchanted with affinity...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Beautifully written - excellent poetry with great description, it really painted a clear picture in my mind. One line

    when this heart strangled of hapinnes

    happiness is spelt incorrectly . . .

    Other than that - perfect, really just beautiful!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Beautiful imagery and an excellent choice of words. i like the way you have linked the most beautiful things on earth - nature and love

    great work!
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Wow... love the phrases and the description. write some more! and thanks for the comment on my poem. ;D 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey yuniardi,
    these parts I really enjoyed:
    i just believe that one day
    when time touch the destiny..

    and also the two first stanzas.
    I'm wondering why don't you participate
    in poetry contests in the forumes.
    your poems are really really well written I think.
    take care,
    marjan

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