Hey yuniardi,
these parts I really enjoyed:
i just believe that one day
when time touch the destiny..

and also the two first stanzas.
I'm wondering why don't you participate
in poetry contests in the forumes.
your poems are really really well written I think.
take care,
marjan

Wow... love the phrases and the description. write some more! and thanks for the comment on my poem. ;D 5/5

Beautiful imagery and an excellent choice of words. i like the way you have linked the most beautiful things on earth - nature and love

great work!
shobhana

Beautifully written - excellent poetry with great description, it really painted a clear picture in my mind. One line

when this heart strangled of hapinnes

happiness is spelt incorrectly . . .

Other than that - perfect, really just beautiful!

Peace. [Sole]