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by LKA Dec 15, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Gone for now, Gone forever, All those moments, Will always be treasure. Popping those pills, Grasping that blade, Tightening that rope, The rope you made. Tie it loose, Tie it tight, Tie it however you want, You'll still die tonight. You fell, Or did you? They told me, But i know its not true. You planned it, You planned it all, You planned it down to, That final fall. It never goes away, It stays in my mind, Thinking about the memories, The people you left behind.
by dwight
5/5, great poem, like the theme and the idea of structuring it that way, perfect. rhymes are nice, everything is just... GREAT! thank you for sharing it with us dwight
by lOVER
Your poem was absolutely awesome