Are these true? again i say awww these r nice... sad but very good
Keep it up

DevilsAngel

Hey. Thanks so much for commenting on my poem, meant alot.

Anyways, you have a great poem here, thats for sure. The only thing is, that its a bit hard to read. As in, your format could use a bit of work. Instead of having it in one big block of text, try spacing it out and putting in some punctuations. Try browsing online on google for styles of poems and such. Read over them and maybe it could help you with future poems.

This poem has a lot of potential and I like how you described some of your lines. Very interesting.

Good Job. Keep it up.

--Angie xoxo