Daddy Come Home

Oh sweetie this is so raw. Trust me hon you really don't need this guy (I should know my dad left when I was nine)
You have real strength which comes through in your poems.

Thats really sad, my best friend is in the same kinda situation, im really sorry... anyways good poem. it flowed well, and was to the point.

I am so sorry of how you are feeling. I can relate, but its my mom not my dad. I haven't been with my mom since I was 8 years old and now Im 21. I know the pain you feeling. Keep your head up high. Girl it is nothing you did, your dad is the one missing out. 5/5 You are great. Keep writing these wonderful poems. It is the best way to get your emotions out.
Crystal

I am so sorry for you, having to go through with this! It's so unfair. Beautiful poem!

I dont know if u can call him dad at this point...he more like a monster...which always like to do wrong to u and thats not the way to go...but ur feelings are majorly hurt...5/5