by Vickie
It is mysterious and a brake from the love poems |
by Jackie Marie
Good job :) 5/5 |
by Syn
Awsome |
Super poem |
by Megadrive
That was really good! I loved it! Again only suggestion is periods and commas. Other then that... its great! |
I love this one :) very expressive think this my favourite out of the three :) the darkness is so mysterious isn't it... when we're in pain, we like to hide into the darkness, even when its sunny outside, we still feel dark... back into that dark moment, we make things dark for ourselves... |
by Vickie
Thanks everyone |
by Jerry Scott
Love this poem! Nice flow and carries a lot of meaning. Keep it up! |
by avery
Aw. |
Wow, that was awesome. i loved it. 5/5 |
by Vickie
Thanks everyone I really appreciate your comments!!! |
by Vickie
Thank you everyone as I said b 4 I really appreciate your support |