Comments : Darkness Falls

  • 18 years ago

    by Vickie

    It is mysterious and a brake from the love poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Good job :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    Awsome

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Super poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    That was really good! I loved it! Again only suggestion is periods and commas. Other then that... its great!
    I also voted on ur poem *21 Questions, 0 Answers* but the site logged me out when I clicked on it so I could not make a comment. Same thing commas and periods. Other then that it was very good. Beautiful, like this one=)
    ~Megan~

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    I love this one :) very expressive think this my favourite out of the three :) the darkness is so mysterious isn't it... when we're in pain, we like to hide into the darkness, even when its sunny outside, we still feel dark... back into that dark moment, we make things dark for ourselves...

    oops there i go again.. x.x i can really relate =P but yah, you might be able to see why i can relate if you read any of my poems written in the past few days... from "imperfection" and the ones after?

  • 18 years ago

    by Vickie

    Thanks everyone

  • 18 years ago

    by Jerry Scott

    Love this poem! Nice flow and carries a lot of meaning. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    Aw.
    I really liked this one.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow, that was awesome. i loved it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Vickie

    Thanks everyone I really appreciate your comments!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Vickie

    Thank you everyone as I said b 4 I really appreciate your support