by Robin Dec 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You called me up and asked me if I had money, |
I feel that...all gangstas are the same. I loved your poem keep doin what you do. |
by Darien
This was a really, well, let's just say this poem was all over the place. What would be nice, is if you broke it up into verses. In each verse, keep all the ideas that are similar in it. It makes it easier to read. I'll give you a 5, because although it was hard to read, the poem itself was good. |
by Stephanie
DAMN! this iz a really goood poem! keep it up! |