Dead xxx

by Amanda Loraine   Dec 15, 2005


Gazing eyes
of stone
here's my
life torched
from my
dry soul
take my
cold lungs
have my
false heart
keep my
mute soul
i've been
hung on
the line
left out
to dry
fish bowl
view
never shown
so dull
battered hope
drenched with
loaded guns
eyes crisp
with fear
just keep
on moving
you shouldn't
be here

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Loraine

    Thank you so much.
    I appreciate it

  • 18 years ago

    by dwight

    Really good poem, reaaaaaaaly love the structure
    not to long, not to short, some good rhymes in it, a poem that really deserves a 5/5
    excellent+
    dwight

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