Oh Sweetie, this is so loving and touching........ Written beautifully, straight from the heart.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Get write Darien... Superb truth :)

Best of luck this season !

Nicely done! Great write!

Darien ,
What an incredibly beautiful piece this is ...
It captures the many beauties of christmas ..

This is a beautiful poem! I agree with everything you said. 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

Great holiday poem! 5/5

I thought you did a great job. I really liked the repeatation of Christmas to me at the beginning of each stanza.

I like this poem. It is sweet and honest and I really just liked it. A bit of fun, a bit of religion, and bit of wisdom. Nice job!

-Tainted Mikochan

P.S. Your picture on you profile is really cute!

A beautiful p0em. i h0pe u had a w0nderful xmas!!! and santa b0ught u all nice presents =p
mine wasnt t0o bad. bit sad.. but thew new yr was better! =)
a tt0uching write darl. keep it up

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

This is soo sweet can so relate :)
xoxo robyn

How true your words are, that is Christmas to me too. Very heartfelt and touching, and this piece reminded me of what Christmas really is about, giving instead of receiving, etc. What wise and sage words, you have such talent, reading this piece was so fun yet made me think too. Good repetition, that really set it perfectly, and the flow was flawless! Keep writing, always and forever. 5/5 from me.