Not bad. It was a really nice poem, but you night want to clean up your rhyming a little bit, I wasnt sure if you were trying to rhyme things, or if the odd one just came up. In anycase, I thought it was really good, and had a straightforward and good message. Good Job.

I havent read your other poems yet, but if they are all like THis you are getting fives on all of them

I like this poem a lot.It talks about a lot of the feelings i have had.This is a very good.You got a nice talent and i hope it takes you far.

-Russell-

Great poem. its very well written.

one thing though, a slight typo i think:
"When you think about depression and the way it controls your life, you really want to give it up, you've even got the knife."
should this be 2 seperate lines?

THATS A MESSAGE WHICH SHOULD BE MARKED TO ALL THE MEMBERS ON THIS SITE (incl me) I CANT SHOW U HOW I FELT AFTER READING THIS POEM..SO I M WRITING IN CAPITAL AS I FEEL LIKE STANDING UP AND APPRECIATING U FOR THIS GREAT WORK......

THIS ONE IS UNDOUBT... THE BEST OF ALL...GREAT STANDUP DEAR...ALL THE BEST & STAY THAT WAY!!

I can realte, i love it!!!

Here is the reason I am always:Depressed it\\\'s me,
everyday.
I learned to never turn away,
with everyday I fade more into it.
People calling me names.

I love this poem natz.
and I love you!
~*~Heather~*~

I love how u just talked bout depression so bluntly..

this is something im struggling with and thats why this poem was beautiful to me...