"I thought that some day I could reach for the sky,
But now I am forever falling" wot a "nice" quote, it really stands out! definatly 5/5!

Good poem.
And thanks for your comment.

I really like this whole poem, and the ideas expressed within it, especially the last stanza. Well done.
*VioletRaven*

I really enojyed reading this poem.
its very well written and dark.
i loved it. :)
xxo