by LOVE.ME.HATE.ME Dec 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Have mercy on my pitiful soul, |
by Dianna M Tuohy
I really enjoyed this. I'm not quite sure what it is, maybe it's that each stanza has a nice beat to it in my mind, and that you seem to rhyme pretty well in the right places, but this was quite a good read. Keep it up! 5 |